Even though I have made many grammatical errors, I have been able to express my ideas better. For example my skills for working on expressing detail have become better. (pg. 12 paragraph 2) My mother laid my suit of armor on my bed, as I would slay my dragon. I compare my jersey to a suit of armor and the challenge I would face at the game to be the dragon. Even being able to describe settings also. (pg. 7 paragraph 1) Walking on the field, it looked like a painted piece of artwork strokes of green, brown, and white overlaying each other. Looking at my revisions and taking advice from correction that my professors provided help me deleted, added and rearranged paragraph. (pg. 3 paragraph 3) I took the details of having fear from remembering the out come of the pitcher before me and pressure from my team. With a change (pg 13 paragraph 1) I rearranged the paragraphed around. Also I added detail of what I was thinking at the time.
For my first part of the class I have learned a lot from this class. I have not had a great foundation for writing any type of paper. My improvements from were I started to be a dramatic increase. I do need to work on my grammatical issues, but that can be help with much proofreading. As a reader I still have to work on comprehending some piece of work but that’s from having a very small vocabulary. I need to start reading more because I know more work that read will be more complex than the stuff that we are reading now. My thinking process has improved a lot. With our first blog of a descriptive essay, I learned that with type and patience I can write good pieces. As a writer, I learned that I enjoy writing descriptive essays because it makes me think more than I would on a certain subject. For working on a narrative essay I can official say that proud of completing an official paper in college that can be highly graded.
This is a good start for me this semester I feel.
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